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Blogmania and why I love the Cajun Book Lady

Friday, April 30th, 2010

As part of Blogmania, the Cajun Book Lady featured an interview with me about The Last Track which ties into a giveaway.

Read the interview and take a chance ( NOTE: Contest last one day only April 30, 2010 )

Also, at 1PM today, leading a workshop on character creation for a group of high school students. By the end, they will have some new tools for building more credible and memorable characters. If I do my job right, that is.

Two turntables and a microphone

Sunday, April 25th, 2010

Several  people asked me how The Last Track is selling. The short answer: check back in August. That will be the six month anniversary, and will follow some nice promotions the publisher arranged in June and July. I have not asked for sales figures for a reason.

Six months after the release is a good point to take stock of where things are. At a large publisher, a new title  gets about three weeks to grow legs and walk. If the title isn’t shipping a month after the drop date, the promotion basically ends. At ninety days, the returns start, so even if sales did pick up after the promotion faded into memory, the book has to fight upstream just to break even. And that’s a long hard walk, I’ve been told.

This is one of the reasons I’m fine with being at a small publisher. Less titles means more focus. If I learned anything in martial arts, its that when the smaller opponent fights their fight, instead of the larger opponents, mutes any advantage in size.

But I do know we moved past the friends and family point. There’s questions about the book coming in from people that read it and started following me on Twitter or reading the site, and I don’t know who they are. Perhaps they were lurking quietly all along, but something prompted them to write as of late.

Any way, for those interested, some tour announcements and interviews will follow shortly.

In the meantime, have a cupcake.

After the Patty

Monday, March 22nd, 2010

If I ever wondered how much alcohol was enough in a single evening, well, now I have a conclusive answer. Gain noticeable weight over a weekend–that’s enough booze.

After dealing with a flood of epic proportions that killed power at work last weekend, and fried five-sixths of the Internet connection for several days, some post St. Patty festivities made for a smart end to Spring Break, albeit a pudgy one. Lesson learned.

Several positive reviews came in over the last few days. Much thanks to everyone for their kind posts. Apparently I’m the first author who netted multiple reviews at What A Book, which is an honor.

Going forward review excerpts will appear on the Reviews page, with some links to the full write-up. So rather than me mentioning new additions, if interested just check the page whenever.

Vacationland Update

Thursday, March 11th, 2010

Today marks the beginning of the fifth day of leisure–if one considers poring over sheets of lined paper with a gel pen, outlining a novel particularly relaxing. Not that I do either, but it’s fun. Especially with four cats thrashing about the apartment. Recently learned that when cats rub against the fresh pages, the friction not only smears the text, it leaves streaks on their fur that resembles crop circles.

At some point Wednesday ( or maybe Tuesday, for in Vacationland the days run together ) I realized I hadn’t been outside in two days, and it was time to do something about that oversight. So I visited a neighbor downstairs. The sojourn took me out of the apartment, without actually requiring that I leave the building. Going outside might compromise the mission, which is to forget that the apartment and its contents, myself included, are still in New Jersey. It’s long running campaign.

While leaving did not require shattering the fantasy, stepping out did mean wearing pants, which made for a bittersweet visit, to say the least.

Anyway, some reviews for The Last Track came in recently, which I’m happy about. There’s another giveaway on GoodReads very soon ( perhaps as soon as Friday ), maybe with a St. Patty’s day theme. Also there’s one definite cool announcement that I can announce in about ten days, and a possibly huge announcement that I can not even speculate about with my outside voice just yet.

Here’s the latest review in for The Last Track.

Spring Break means no rest for the wicked

Sunday, March 7th, 2010

As happens every March, the students leave for a two week break, and the school allows for a one week vacation. Amen.

Right now, knee deep in outlining the next book. Hard lesson learned  from The Last Track ( and another manuscript that preceded it that will likely never see the light of day ), before diving headlong into a big writing project, I like to be able to do two things:

First, summarize the entire story to three sentences. They can be long compound sentences, the sort generally absent in my writing, or very simple. But the mini synopsis must be concise, coherent and complete. And I’ll bounce that “blurb” off a dozen people. If I sense I’m losing them, that they “aren’t getting it”, then the concept needs more fine-tuning.

Second and more importantly, character sketches. In the hieararchy of development, character motivations matter first and appearance last. Description is a detail and can be added as needed, for flourish. Motivation is what impels a character to act as they do. Characters are not their khakis, Calvin Klein jeans or their Prada shoes. Nor are they black, white or trans-gender. That is incidental. No, characters are what they do, and that rests upon their motivations.

What makes someone tick determines their role in the story, and shapes their interactions with other characters. Most importantly understanding and accepting their motivations forces me to be efficient. Generally that efficacy means letting characters do what they must, consistent with their internal script, and getting out of the way.

And staying out of the way.

So I’m not quite there, but in another week I’ll be close.

Notes from the edge

Monday, March 1st, 2010

GoodReads giveaway wrapped on February 28, 2010. In all, 892 readers entered for a chance at one of five free copies. Winners were selected automatically by GoodReads. The publisher can not disclose or contact the winners ( except to send them the book ), but I can announce that all five copies with personalized signatures shipped this afternoon.

Huge thanks to everyone for taking the time to enter. Please note, there will be further giveaways of The Last Track on GoodReads.com in the near future.

On a personal note, I’m very happy there is a place where readers can share their opinions about books that publishers, be they large large or small, cannot sway with the threat of offering or withholding advertising dollars. It’s really all about the readers. Related lesson to self: bring the A-game, and do so every time.

‘Cause sooner or later, the Internets will have their day in the court of opinion.

678 entries

Wednesday, February 24th, 2010

So far 678 readers entered the publisher sponsored contest on GoodReads.com for a chance at one of five free copies of The Last Track. Still four days left in the giveaway. Quite a bit better turnout than I expected.

Much thanks to Cyndy for the suggestion.

I believe the writer has two jobs. First, get out of the way of the story and let the characters do theirs. Second, and more importantly, listen to what readers have to say about the story, because well, they tend to have a lot of great ideas.

More importantly, readers actually pay for books.