The Excursion

Here’s some pics from my weekend excursion to Canada. Much thanks to my very gracious hosts in Peterborough. Hope to see you soon in New Jersey. Unfortunately my batteries expired en route and I was having so much fun, by the time I remembered to snap pics, only thirty minutes and a foggy day remained for documenting. A good argument for checking equipment before packing next time.

One of these might be Writer Guy.

The Toronto – Tortuga conspiracy. Turtles lurked about the walls and paths.

A fierce wind guided us across this suspension bridge.

Time flies in the Great White North.

Imagine their view…

Oh Canada

Reached Toronto without a hitch and met one of my gracious hosts at Pearson International. Not only did they open their home to me, they provided lightning fast shuttle service. Great, great people. As this is my first trip to Ontario, I’m drinking in sights and stories as deeply as I can. A more complete synopsis will follow early next week.

Before departure, fired off two more queries for The Last Track. As for the screen writing contest, the halfway mark beckons.

4-0 and not 0ld English

The screenplay effort continues, as I cross the 40 page mark. Since 50 is halfway, I’m happy with the progress, and also having a lot of fun with the story. This week is vacation, so I have a lot more time than usual for writing, which I have seldom found a bad thing.
The professional proofreader working the line edits for The Last Track is ahead of schedule–another plus. Querying for the manuscript continues, but nothing new to report there.
And soon I’ll be in Peterborough, Ontario chillaxing.
That’s three aces in my book.

Twenty Se7en

One of the greatest things about screenplays for me is the premium placed on forward motion; it’s the one form which allows a writer to start and finish a scene without making apologies. In fact, a rapid assault is the whole point. Make something happen and fast. There’s another coup, though.

Screenplays are compact.

End to end, a properly formatted screenplay lands south of 120 pages. 100 pages is very common, a length of 105 pages is my projection for the contest. And given that much of the content is white space, slug lines, and character names, there’s not a tremendous amount of words to manage and edit at all. Which makes spotting and addressing issues easier. And there’s little bothering with my old nemesis, description.

See, coherent scene set ups in a novel are a good idea, and a matter of course. Truly effective ones are hard to write, and I admire authors who pull in the audience with well phrased imagery that evokes sentiment and interest.

But an expertly styled scene dripping with adjectives and similes in a screenplay? Waste of time. EXT. HERO’S FRONT LAWN DAY. The action happens outside, during the day, on the hero’s yard. Boom. Done. Me, I’m drinking a beer while a director paints in the blanks.

Yeah, so far I’m having a blast. Tally in this effort to date: four writing sessions, twenty-seven pages. Three more weeks at this clip leaves two weeks for revisions. Or so.