Start at the beginning

During last month of heads down writing, a few ideas bubbled up from wherever stories come. These bits had no connection to the manuscript so I jotted them in text files and set them aside. Call them distractions perhaps, and very unwelcome in the moment. Essentially they were raw, rough, half formed seeds. Tiny ideas so undeveloped that when reviewing the sentence fragments weeks afterwards, I questioned why I bothered. Yet something caught my eye.

At the time, leaving the files be was difficult, one more so than the others. It interested me and on several occasions my thoughts strayed from the manuscript. That was bad enough, but the most interesting bit of the lot made the least sense. Late nights, I popped open the file and tried to decipher what it meant. What had I meant? Considering the note was a single brief phrase: 7PM confession, a chalice unless the keyboard banged out its own answer, I was at a loss. I considered deletion and went to bed.

On Tuesday, I tried a new writing exercise. Focus on an idea for five minutes, crank an egg timer to sixty, and let it rip at the keyboard. When the timer dings, stop. The object of my focus: the nonsensical sentence fragment. The approach worked. An hour later, I had three pages and a nice ending to…well…maybe a novel. I slept on the pages for two days and returned to them Thursday. If the ending still strikes me the same way next Monday – as an ending – I’ll allocate sixty minutes a day for a week and see what can be done about a beginning.

The Eight

Not bugging The Eight for progress reports is hard. The kid on Christmas morning in me wants to blast a broadcast email message, a temptation thus far resisted. Besides it’s actually the Seven right now, as one manuscript is still in the mail. Must…resist..urge to check…package tracking.

Yet another lesson in letting go of outcome. That’s been a major problem for me throughout the writing process. I took the story as far as possible with minimal outside input and now is the time to allow other voices some sway. While I could pull a J.D. Salinger and invest another 9 years writing, that sort of gestation period is unacceptable. I don’t write classics; I write entertainment.

Hopefully, the fun of entries like these is that I’ve no clearer idea how the story will end than anyone stumbling across them.

Rock the Dead vote

From Sunday’s USA Today: Trenton, NJ – A judge concerned about the potential for voter fraud in Tuesday’s election has ordered the state to compile the names of all adult New Jersey residents who have died since 1985.

“It is truly alarming,” Feinberg said of concerns that people might have used dead people’s names to illegally vote.

Maybe those dead voters might have voted exactly the same way if they were still alive, Judge Feinberg. Ever think of that? God, I love New Jersey. And the Mafia. You guys just keep on doing that Mafia thing.

Up the irons

Printed the last of the eight copies Sunday for the pre-submit readers. But before doing that I did some reading of my own. Actually reading my copy start to end took six hours; your results may vary. I edited a few awkward sentences, adjusted some punctuation goofs, and dropped one paragraph. The cuts totaled a net loss of 107 words – not too shabby. The pre-submit readers are getting essentially the same manuscript I read on Saturday, which is very much the manuscript that wrapped on November 1, 2005.

Monday is all about distribution. The Wife whisked some copies away; I dropped a few off at people’s homes last night. One leaves by post for the Heartland this morning. The final package is being picked up at my place. At this point, everything about the process is beyond my control. It’s time for new challenges.

This is the last entry about the book for awhile. Back to amusing entries – I hope – again.